Draft Design (Feedback)

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Feedback

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  • Also second and third spread way too similar in pace.
  • First spread doesn’t connect to the rest of them.
  • Try to use hand drawn illustrations.

Plan of action

  • improve pace (change layout)
  • see layout with illustrations
  • look at rag
  • change justification
  • add background colour
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